Connection diagram for detectors to Satel Perfecta 16 to be checked

Hello, can any of you check if I drew the detector and siren connection to the SATEL Perfecta 16 control unit correctly?

1x Satel Perfecta 16 alarm control panel
1x LCD keypad for Satel PRF-LCD system operation
4x Paradox PRO Plus indoor motion detector
1x acoustic-optical siren SL-550
1x 40VA transformer
1x 7.2Ah / 12V backup battery
1x ANT-GSM-I dual-band antenna

I will be grateful for the amendment, best regards

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It seems to me that something with the siren is wrong - but I never had it in my hand, poor instruction

From right:
TMP - tamper from tamper should be connected to the control panel input, not the output, i.e. Z8 will be elegant because you take the ground to the siren tamper from the side.
GND - OK
BAT +/-
12+ there should be a permanent 12V power supply, i.e. some AUX
12- here should be solid mass or some COM
TR- - it seems to me that it is enough when you connect the low-current output O3 or O4 - this is only a signal to trigger, it does not have to be high-current

Personally, I lead one mass to the detectors and then a bridge to the temp - but I'm an amateur and professionals will scold me here .

The rest seems OK.